Post by TheDavii on Dec 12, 2009 8:23:56 GMT -5
I think I'll change it to either "Parting Shot" or "Last Chance".
Did you ever change the card list for your deck listing? The file date is prior to your last post. I really like the deck list.
I did notice that the card 733 - "The Bunny Collective" was quite long. Your original text is:
Assimilates all of your bunnies in The Bunny Circle into a Bunny Collective (place the bunnies underneath this card). The Holographic Bunny or a Halo’d bunny cannot be assimilated. Assimilated bunnies discard all attached cards (rank, clover, etc) and loose all special abilities. Any bunnies that appear within your section of The Bunny Circle are immediately assimilated. The Bunny Collective is treated as a single space in the bunny circle. The Bunny Collective does not need to feed and cannot be abducted. When defending against a weapon, every bunny within the collective may roll. If no bunny successfully defends against the weapon, then half of the bunnies (round up) in the collective are discarded. Terrible Misfortune cards can be used kill one bunny within the collective (Very Terrible and ExtremelyTerrible Misfortune cards are treated as normal). If at any time there are no bunnies within the Bunny Collective, then this card is discarded.Besides being too long to comfortably fit onto a card (even with 7 point text), it also uses language like "...all of your bunnies..." Is it intended only for a player to play on himself? I think it would be far more useful to play on an opponent. If I might, I suggest this rewording:
Assimilates all of target player's bunnies in The Bunny Circle intoThen this text can be moved into Bunny Bits for the card:
The Bunny Collective. Assimilated bunnies discard all associated cards and lose all special abilities. Any bunnies that appear within target player's section of The Bunny Circle are immediately assimilated. The Bunny Collective does not need to feed and cannot be abducted. When defending against a weapon, every bunny within the collective may roll. If no bunny successfully defends against the weapon, then half of the bunnies (round up) in The Bunny Collective are discarded. Terrible Misfortune cards can kill one bunny within The Bunny Collective. If at any time there are no bunnies within The Bunny Collective, then The Bunny Collective is discarded.
To assimilate, place the bunnies underneath this card. The Holographic
Bunny or a Halo’d bunny cannot be assimilated into the Bunny Collective. The Bunny Collective is treated as a single space in The Bunny Circle. (Very Terrible and Extremely Terrible Misfortune cards are treated normally).
Also on the card 735 (Lucky Clover - Half), the rule is
May be placed on any bunny, lowering the strength of any weapon by half a point.How does that work in actual play? Since nothing else uses a half-point, it seems that this would be irrelevant to any actual outcome unless some sort of rounding is used.